In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers/books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Todays
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technologies enable us to read
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a book
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on electronic devices and what’s more, we can store hundreds of thousands of
books
on devices like Amazon’s
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e-reader.
This
makes some
people
to
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believe that
people
will stop printing
books
and in the future, everything will be digitalized. Electronic
books
and
newspapers
have many advantages. They are easy to use and
rech
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reach
rich
.They can be stored in computers, mobiles, e-readers and in
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in huge amounts and are available at any time. The cost of manufacturing and printing is completely removed, which reduced their price. Digital book and
newspapers
also
have one very important advantage – they are
environmentaly
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environmentally
friendly. No paper is used to print
magazings
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magazines
and
books
, which means
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trees are cut from our forests to produced papers. All of these factors convinced many
people
that digital versions of
books
and
magazines
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more convenient, ethical and cheaper choice.
On the other hand
, traditional printed
books
and
magazines
have existed for centuries and I believe they have created some kind of emotional
conection
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connection
and
value
for
people
. When a man reads a book and he likes it, he most probably would like to have it in a form of a tangible thing.
Books
are a form of art, like statues and paintings. You can have a picture of some famous painting, but the painting
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itself
has some intangible
value
.
Magazines
and
newspapers
do not have
such
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value
in themselves. Based on
this
, I believe that the
amount
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of
books
are printed will decrease considerably and maybe even dramatically,
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printed, tangible
books
will still be demanded by many
people
as they have some aura and
value
in addition
to the things that are written inside. I do think, though, that there is
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big chance
magazines
and
newspapers
will move into the online world completely.
This
is because they are published in huge numbers daily and weekly and monthly and no one needs them after years. Printing so huge amount of articles will demand additional
recources
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resources
and make them less competitive even in terms of price.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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