People think that smart phones are distructing social interaction . To what extend do you agree or disagree

It is

belived

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believed

by some that electronic

devices

are the reason for the destruction of face-to-face interaction nowadays.

This

essay disagrees that the usage of

smart

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smartphones

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phones

has had a negative impact on social relationships .

Firstly

,

this

essay will discuss how electronic

devices

are crucial nowadays and

secondly

, how

this

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this device

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devices

have an impact on the relationship between people . As living in

such

a dynamic world requires a lot of

usage

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of

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if

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technology

in order to adapt to the lifestyles ,

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, in order to adapt to the lifestyles , smart phones,

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smart

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smartphones

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phones

are now essential in order to have a normal life . The technology is improving in

extreem

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extreme

spead

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speed

and so are the people .

The

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smart

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smartphones

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phones

are

in

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nowadays a must as almost all the tasks are required to be done electronically.

Moreover

, it is agreed that knowledge in

this

kind of technology , as well as owning the

devices

, is a key part

in

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every job

possition

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position

that you apply

.

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A prime example can be one of my friends who , despite having the highest marks in all lessons , was not accepted in a job due to a lack of knowledge

in

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smartphones and computers . Those opposed to electronic

devices

argue

rhat

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that

they are leading to a world where social interaction is missing .

However

,

i

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totally disagree with

this

view as

this

devices

are helping people to know each-other virtually deeply , making possible to have

a

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real communication and relationship in the real world later . I am an example of the benefits

from

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electronic

devices

. Being an introvert made my relationships in reality very difficult, but knowing my friends virtually helped me break the barriers and

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could leave my comfort zone easier. In conclusion , for as long as everyone is careful to maintain a healthy relationship between virtuality and reality , there should be no worry about the

distruction

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destruction

of social interaction , as

smart

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smartphones

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phones

are used to build social relationships faster and stronger .