Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species . Discuss both views and give your opinion ?

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activities

of transformation of the world

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led the deforestation. some ecologist

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believed that

wildlife

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santuaries

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sanctuaries

should be established to prevent the extinction of

wildlife

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species

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essay will

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discuss

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some positive aspects of

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idea and what could be done to protect them in the

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half and some

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negative

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section. On the one hand,there are many

species

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disappearing

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from the planet and

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.

Santuaries

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Sanctuaries

will help to protect them. To

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explain,we can keep some

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animals and birds in the

wildlife

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park

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and let them breed.

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, animals could raise their population in

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safe place.

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, some Himalayan Hangul Dear were kept in the wild

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after some years there were a prolific number of dear have raised. In

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system

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we can

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our endangered

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and can

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protect our mother nature.

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, there are some devastating

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effects

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be seen for the establishment of

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wildlife

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as animals are habituated with their own

palces

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places

. To elaborate, they could face a hormonal imbalance and could not adjust themselves in those

santuaries

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sanctuaries

area for various reasons.

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, some white Tiger were kept in the Dachigham

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park

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but they could not survive for the weather.Most of them have died.

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conclusion,

wild life

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wildlife

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park

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so many advantages but there have some negative aspects too. So government should take some necessary steps to protect our endangered animal and ensured their proper

guidence

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guidance

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way

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we can

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our

species

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and prevent their extinction.