Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species . Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
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wildlife
santuaries
should be established to prevent the extinction of Correct your spelling
sanctuaries
wildlife
species
.This
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discuss
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idea and what could be done to protect them in the first
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negative
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wildlife
.Santuaries
will help to protect them. To Correct your spelling
Sanctuaries
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explain,we can keep some of
animals and birds in the Change preposition
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wildlife
park
and let them breed. Hence
, animals could raise their population in the
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For instance
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species
and can also
protect our mother nature.
On the other hand
, there are some devastating effetcs
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be seen for the establishment of Correct pronoun usage
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wildlife
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a wildlife
park
as animals are habituated with their own palces
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places
santuaries
area for various reasons. Correct your spelling
sanctuaries
For example
, some white Tiger were kept in the Dachigham wildlife
park
but they could not survive for the weather.Most of them have died.
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wild life
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wildlife
park
have
so many advantages but there have some negative aspects too. So government should take some necessary steps to protect our endangered animal and ensured their proper Change the verb form
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