Write a letter explaining water issues in your house

Daniel/ Uzoma, I think it high time you escalate
this
water
issue in my unit to your management if you have not done so. Since I moved into the unit in 2016, I have battled
this
problem of
water
running dry in my
tank
simply. Anytime you pump
water
Add the particle
to water

It appears that the verb water should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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the
tank
is not filled or sometimes
water
does not get into the
tank
. Jide had tried to
solved
Change the verb
solve

It appears that the verb solved should be in the base form as part of the to-infinitive following tried. Consider changing the verb form.

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this
problem when I
first
moved in but to no avail. I
then
took it upon myself to let your staff understand the routine of shutting up some taps to enable me
get
Add the particle
to get

It appears that the verb get should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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water
when they pump. I am tired of reminding them to do
this
every time.
Instead
, of them
to follow
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following

To follow doesn’t seem to work here.

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the routine they take a ladder to start climbing up the manway to check the
tank
. The pop in
this
Correct determiner usage
these

It seems that determiner use may be incorrect here.

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areas
have
Change the verb form
has

The plural verb have does not appear to agree with the singular subject pop. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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cracks all over the edges
..
Replace the punctuation
.
...

This sentence ends with a double period. Consider changing the punctuation.

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I am always running out of
water
sometimes in the middle of the night or when taking my bath not to mention the
colored
Change the spelling
coloured

The spelling of colored is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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water
because
water
is always at
it
Change the pronoun
its

It appears that the personal pronoun it should be in the possessive form. Consider changing it.

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lowest point in the
tank
. I have at the backyard jars filled with
water
just
Correct your spelling
in case

The word incase doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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incase
Correct your spelling
in case

The word incase doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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. I have resolved to find other alternatives possibly get a 1000
liters
Change the spelling
litres

The spelling of liters is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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tank
at
Change preposition
in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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the backyard. I am just tired of
this
kind of service. Regards, Chris

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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