In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

I believe that any person, including doctors or teachers, have the right to live where they want to
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since the freedom to choose the place for their work and any other activity is the immanent right of human beings.
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for some categories of workers. It is very similar
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or restrictions to move from villages that used to be applied in the past centuries and now is being considered as a relic of the past and now is a type of crime against humanity. The same reason has to be applied to any restriction in respect of people of certain professions or skills.
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