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Too much outdoor lighting is a problem in many cities nowadays. What are the causes and negative impacts of light pollution in cities?

#cities #impacts #light #pollution
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Along with the development of cities, especially in the
ubran
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urban
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excessive outdoor lighting is causing numerous negative effects on people living. Advertising companies,
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, in order to boost the sale of their latest products,
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put their
advertisments
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advertisements
 on streets, buildings, and even highways. With strong lighting effects on the
advertisments
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advertisements
, it may
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 detrimental effects on drivers, citizens and
pedestrain
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pedestrian
pedestrians
. Another major cause is from the warning signs and street lamps, as cities have a higher car accident rate compared to town and
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village
. It is necessary for governments and authorities to put more warning signs on and avoid more casualties.
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, these signs reported by the driver that reflect light during driving and cause
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 accidents. For the causes mentioned above, in terms of negative impacts for
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 phenomenon. Not only drivers on
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,
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 but
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 citizens
live
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 nearby the buildings
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will
 harm their eyes easily or impact the sleeping quality because of the lighting pollution.
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, the consumption of excessive
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electricity
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 impact
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a chain of
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 environment as the average
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temperature
 of the earth has been
raisen
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raised
risen
 in recently years.
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, animals may be attracted to the light emitted from the cities and
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 may interfere with their migration routes and breeding patterns.
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, cocks
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 all night never seem to sleep
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 of the light pollution. In conclusion, lighting pollution has a variety of causes and have severe consequences not only for humans but
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 animals nowadays, and we should take steps to improve it.
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