Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child's development. However, other say that things like television or friends have the must important influence on them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is argued that technology and social circle around the child has an enormous impact on the growth while

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some individuals believe that

parents

play a vital role in the development of their offsprings. In my opinion,

parents

are the

first

person who taught their

children

the difference between right and wrong and most of the characteristics are inherited genetically. There are a number of people who think that their

children

learn those things which they watch in movies, serials, and around them. They just connect themself with unrealistic imaginations and thinks that it's a truth that

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them mental stress and makes them rude.Due to ,that they face other effects

such

as

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lack of concentration in studies, unhealthy lifestyle. To illustrates, in, India

parents

are working for 8 hours job for

this

reason they are not able to spend quality time with their

children

so in order to pass the time they watch non-fiction or sometimes, indulge in bad company.

However

,

parents

should decide what they can do or others don't. On the others hand,

children

influenced by their

parents

are always successful and become a better version of society. Most

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people argued that

children

first

teacher is their mother and father who taught them moral values, time management and how to become a responsible person.

In addition

to

this

,There are a lot of famous personalities who hold a good reputation in the world as their

parents

for example

Aishwarya Rai , Deepika Padukone. In conclusion,

although

friends and entertainment have a role in shaping the child

parents

have the most aspect for the

children

mental as well as the physical development.