Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child's development. However, other say that things like television or friends have the must important influence on them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is argued that technology and social circle around the child has an enormous impact on the growth while
,
some individuals believe that Remove the comma
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parents
play a vital role in the development of their offsprings. In my opinion, parents
are the first
person who taught their children
the difference between right and wrong and most of the characteristics are inherited genetically.
There are a number of people who think that their children
learn those things which they watch in movies, serials, and around them. They just connect themself with unrealistic imaginations and thinks that it's a truth that cause
them mental stress and makes them rude.Due to ,that they face other effects Change the verb form
causes
such
as,
lack of concentration in studies, unhealthy lifestyle. To illustrates, in, India Remove the comma
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parents
are working for 8 hours job for this
reason they are not able to spend quality time with their children
so in order to pass the time they watch non-fiction or sometimes, indulge in bad company. However
, parents
should decide what they can do or others don't.
On the others hand, children
influenced by their parents
are always successful and become a better version of society. Most of
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the
people argued that Correct article usage
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children
first
teacher is their mother and father who taught them moral values, time management and how to become a responsible person. In addition
to this
,There are a lot of famous personalities who hold a good reputation in the world as their parents
for example
Aishwarya Rai , Deepika Padukone.
In conclusion, although
friends and entertainment have a role in shaping the child parents
have the most aspect for the children
mental as well as the physical development.Submitted by daisysharma0087 on
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