Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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As globalization has been promoted in
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world, more people live in a place where they cannot use their mother tongue. As a consequence, they cannot understand the
language
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in the country so that they are causing some problems. In the following essay, I would argue that I agree
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that living in a country that
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you speak
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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will cause a problem and how can it be solved.
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of all, if understanding the
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is difficult, following the rule in the community will be
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challenging and it would cause an issue. People who cannot follow the rule would not be admired
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the local community because they have
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a policy
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and
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to protect themselves.
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, when a man from America went into the sacred place for local Thai people because he could not read the attention, he was harmed by the local inhabitant because they were afraid of the man who
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the area.
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incident occurred because the man moved to a place where he
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to use a foreign
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. One of the
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might be
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the inhabitant
to
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know that the individual
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non-native
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a non-native
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speaker and to have
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generous way of thinking. Those social and practical issues happen because of a fear
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inappropriate
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of foreigners;
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, typically they do not intend to break the rule: the misunderstanding or misinterpretation will make the gap.
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, if the native citizens try to appreciate them, it will reduce the issues.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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