Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As globalization has been promoted in

this

world, more people live in a place where they cannot use their mother tongue. As a consequence, they cannot understand the

language

in the country so that they are causing some problems. In the following essay, I would argue that I agree

with

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that living in a country that

make

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you speak

foreign

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a foreign

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language

will cause a problem and how can it be solved.

First

of all, if understanding the

language

is difficult, following the rule in the community will be

also

challenging and it would cause an issue. People who cannot follow the rule would not be admired

from

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the local community because they have

policy

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and

also

to protect themselves.

For example

, when a man from America went into the sacred place for local Thai people because he could not read the attention, he was harmed by the local inhabitant because they were afraid of the man who

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the area.

This

incident occurred because the man moved to a place where he

have

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to use a foreign

language

. One of the

solution

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might be

let

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the inhabitant

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know that the individual

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non-native

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a non-native

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speaker and to have

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generous way of thinking. Those social and practical issues happen because of a fear

for

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inappropriate

behavior

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of foreigners;

however

, typically they do not intend to break the rule: the misunderstanding or misinterpretation will make the gap.

Therefore

, if the native citizens try to appreciate them, it will reduce the issues.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

250 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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