Scientific research should be funded by governments rather than commercial organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered that commercial
organizations
are not favoured to be financial contributors to scientific
research
,
instead
,
governments
should be the ones who fund the
research
. In my perspective,
governments
cannot have the ability to raise
such
tremendous fund as private companies have been contributing
for
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science.  It is indeed that the contribution of government to science is compulsory and requisite,
however
, their ability is limited.
Governments
are not
only
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fund for science but
also
a
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financial support for other fields,
such
as education, infrastructure, security or retirement programs.
Accordingly
,
governments
cannot contribute enough financial need for scientific projects, which requires an enormous number of investments. Since private
organizations
are the group of companies that can make a huge profit,
therefore
, they are capable of supporting science’s finances.  As the saying goes “Two is better than one”
hence
the contribution of commercial
organizations
is vital for scientific
research
. The billionaire Bill Gates,
for example
, is a major funder for WHO (World Health Organization) and CDC (Centers of Disease Control and Prevention),
thus
the two
organizations
can be able to make a tremendous number of
research
and experiment on the COVID-19 virus. The company Johnson & Johnson is
also
funding for the making of
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COVID-19 vaccine. The vaccine was predicted to be debut around one to two years, but because of the generosity of many commercial companies, our society can
finally
have the access to COVID-19 vaccines.  In conclusion, the union investment of both public and private organization is vital for scientific projects.
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