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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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Competitiveness
 is an inevitable essence in our daily lives, whether when we are
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 adult or a child. With
such
 ubiquitous existence, it undoubtedly has great impacts on our physical development, sanity and mental state.
Therefore
, the debate about competitions in human societies has been
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 for decades as to state if it would be a negative or positive
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. Personally, I suggest that
although
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 atmosphere can raise life quality, too much of it can be a disadvantage. Since
one
 has to compete with others in order to not be defeated or left behind,
competitiveness
 has become
one
 of the largest stress
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 to ever be known. As
one
’s mind has to stay focus and concentrate on not only his goal but
also
 observe others’
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 to deduce the best strategy.
However
,
such
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 will cost a bulk amount of energy and likely lead to exhaustion. In some cases, health problems may even arise.
Therefore
, it can be concluded that
comepetitiveness
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competitiveness
 affects us on a whole-body scale. Take
marathon
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for example
, in a race where there likely will be more than a hundred participants,
one
 will need to have a
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 plan on how long a sprinting interval should
last
 before finishing the race that can be at least five
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 long and become the champion. As far as it is
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,
competitiveness
 can be negative in virtually no field except for health. With it being relevant,
one
 will have a much clearer opponent to defeat and improve himself. In
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, motivation will play alongside
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competitiveness
. Not even we can be
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renovated
 and encouraged to work harder, much experience can be gained through the weaknesses in our strategy comparing to others. In general,
competitivess
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competitiveness
competitive
 is mostly a healthy tendency. It is not
competitiveness
 itself that may cause the
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deleterious
 effects but the reasons are entirely attached to us. If
one
 pushes himself too much, there will be damage involving his quality of life.
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