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Nowadays more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face, is this a positive or negative development?

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In
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 day and age, more and more people prefer to meet others using social media,
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 of meeting in person.
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 could be seen as positive or negative behaviour, and in
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 ,essay both viewpoints will be analyzed. Interacting online is undoubtedly easier for many reasons, but the biggest pros are that there is no need to schedule a meeting in advance, and
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 can save a lot of time and energy.
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,
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 type of socialization has become popular even in the work environment. As the experts affirm there was an increase of people who decided to work from home during the
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 decade,
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, they have to interact with their colleagues mainly online, and
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 has probably changed some lives for the better But, there are always two sides of the same medal.
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, some can argue that meeting others only online can be a big loss in terms of social interactions. In fact, some activities can not be done through a laptop,
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, go to the cinema or even have a cup of coffee at the bar.
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 can be old-fashioned though, but life is made
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 of experiences, and they appear to disappear. Not to mention, the online meetings are not the same as the meeting in the office, where normally there are normal conversations before the meetings, and sometimes there are snacks and hot beverages to encourage the members of the staff to socialize and to interact with each other. In conclusion, despite the number of advantages of virtual encounters, I think that the face to face is far better, and if it is possible I encourage people to do so more often.
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