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Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely.Others think that this is a waste of financial resources .Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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İt is a highly debated issue whether or not spending Money on
languages
 that are under the die risk by the government .In
this
 essay ,ı will discuss both views. On the one hand , those who say the authority should endurance to save
languages
 give their reasons as follow.
Firstly
, the
language
 reflects the
culture
 of the
country
.Put simply,dying out completely
languages
 means loss of cultures because
language
 is the verbal expression of
culture
.
Secondly
,it is inescapable that the loss of
language
 leads to a lack of communication among society because it is well-known fact that
language
 is the best means of communication.
As a result
 ,
culture
 and
language
 are interrelated. Had the
language
 been saved, the
culture
 of the
country
 would die out in a short time.
On the other hand
, some people ,who ı agree with those, hold the opinion that is a waste of money which is spent to save
languages
. Some speech which is unused by the most of community has had the biscuit and they become disappear , which enable people to use natural tough without different idiom,
therefore
 , speakers can be understood easily regardless of the difference of speech .take some countries whose ministry do not spend money on
language
 for saving an example; in
this
 countriescountrycountries
country
, the
language
 is more simple than others countries and society used a coherent
language
 and governments should spend fund for another benefit things
such
 as education or health problems,
therefore
 these countries
country
 could develop easily. To summarize in light of the information given above ,
although
 there is a number of people who uphold the opposite ,ı believe that the state should not spend pay on having had biscuit
language
.
Submitted by Ahmet Münir KOCAMAN on

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