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this
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this
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people
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the medical field. There Change preposition
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are
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number
of advantages of it. The Change the article
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the number
first
one
is, these days all decease’s surgeries are available also
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70% of cancer patients having well improvement Remove the comma
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last
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high-level
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of technology
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one
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of intelligent doctors are
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is
which
have really great knowledge Correct pronoun usage
who
also
who have studied from abroad. For example
, in the last
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27 years old doctor saves 2 children’s life who was attached their body with each other by born and 2 doctors were already said they were not live more.
However
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to
extant
. In Correct your spelling
extent
this
technological era, the number
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rising. For some decease’s surgery doctors are offering lot
of Change the article
a lot
money
to the patients. Provide huge money
is affordable to rich person but for poor people
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For example
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the times
a news
in which a doctor ask for 5 lakh cash to the patient for their illness surgery.
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number
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