One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.

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great thing about human due to changing into health care facilities. In

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is, these days all decease’s surgeries are available

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health field have advanced machines for all type of illness.

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70% of cancer patients having well improvement

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their health

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serious illness because of the

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of intelligent doctors

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have really great knowledge

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who have studied from abroad.

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27 years old doctor saves 2 children’s life who was attached their body with each other by born and 2 doctors were already said they were not live more.

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tough situation.

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of India published

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in which a doctor ask for 5 lakh cash to the patient for their illness surgery. To sum up, there

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of advantages compare to the disadvantages but who can afford to spend

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