One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. In this modern era, Citizen is living a long and very healthy life which one is the very great thing about human due to changing into health care facilities.

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have forgotten to take care of themselves. Nowadays,

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are really thankful for the advanced technology in the medical field. There is a

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of advantages

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is, these days all decease’s surgeries are available

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health field have advanced machines for all type of illness.

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in their health in the

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is a very serious illness because of the

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of technology.

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of intelligent doctors is rising who have really great knowledge

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who have studied from abroad.

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27 years old doctor saves 2 children’s life who was attached their body with each other by born and 2 doctors were already said they were not live more.

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has disadvantage to some extent. In

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technological era, the

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of payment for treatment is

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rising. For some decease’s surgery doctors are offering a lot of

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to the patients. Provide huge

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is affordable to rich person but for poor

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it is a very tough situation.

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, the times of India published news in which a doctor ask for 5 lakh cash to the patient for their illness surgery. To sum up, there is a

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of advantages

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to the disadvantages but who can afford to spend

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technology is a blessed for him but for poor

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they have a major question about

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