One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. In this modern era, Citizen is living a long and very healthy life which one is the very great thing about human due to changing into health care facilities.
In
this
competitive era, people
have forgotten to take care of themselves. Nowadays, people
are really thankful for the advanced technology in the medical field. There is a number
of advantages of
it. The Change preposition
to
first
one
is, these days all decease’s surgeries are available also
health field have advanced machines for all type of illness. For example
, The survey which was conducted by Google shows that 70% of cancer patients having well improvement
in their health in the Replace the word
improved
last
10 years which one
is a very serious illness because of the Correct your spelling
high level
high-level
of technology. Correct your spelling
high level
Moreover
, the second
one
is, these days the number
of intelligent doctors is rising who have really great knowledge also
who have studied from abroad. For example
, in the last
,year one
27 years old doctor saves 2 children’s life who was attached their body with each other by born and 2 doctors were already said they were not live more.
However
,it also
has disadvantage to some extent. In this
technological era, the number
of payment for treatment is also
rising. For some decease’s surgery doctors are offering a lot of money
to the patients. Provide huge money
is affordable to rich person but for poor people
it is a very tough situation. Add a comma
,people
For example
, the times of India published news in which a doctor ask for 5 lakh cash to the patient for their illness surgery.
To sum up, there is a number
of advantages compare
to the disadvantages but who can afford to spend Change the form of the verb
compared
money
this
technology is a blessed for him but for poor people
they have a major question about money
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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