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Some people want the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets; however others think it a waste of public money when there are so many problems in earth that the government should be solving. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #government #money #life #planets #waste #earth
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Few of the masses believe that
government
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 spending should be allocated in search of
life
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 on other planets, while others claim that various obstacles like pollution and deforestation should be solved by the
government
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instead
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 of wasting
money
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 on
research
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 programs.
This
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 essay will analyze both perspectives and explain why I support the latter view. On the one hand, those who hold the thought that the
government
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money
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 should be used to look
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life
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like
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 on other planets advocates that
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 step makes the nation stronger.
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, the formation of
research
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 programs and their positive result rise the reputation of the
country
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.
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, a recent
government
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 survey in our
country
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 has demonstrated that the launch of a rocket in Nepal has made the
country
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 known all over the world.
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, the spending on scientific
research
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 helps to be famous.
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, people who oppose
this
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 view feel that the use of
government
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money
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 for searching for
life
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 is just a waste of public income which means that public
money
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 should be used to solve environmental issues.
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, a recent study of a media channel, NTV has revealed that if we can overcome the pollution and deforestation problem,
then
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 the
life
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 of our planet increases to more than a
thousand-year
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. For
this
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 reason, the
government
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 should try to cope with the environmental issues rather than searching for other planets. Taking everything into consideration, it is clear that, spending on
research
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 make the
country
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 strong and reputed;
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, solving the obstacles faced on the earth can extend the existence of
life
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 on earth.
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, I wholeheartedly believe that the
government
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 should focus on solving environmental problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • extraterrestrial
  • terrestrial issues
  • poverty alleviation
  • sustainable
  • philosophical advancement
  • ethics
  • biological diversity
  • technological breakthroughs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal responsibility
  • humanity's place in the universe
  • pressing issues
  • critical resources
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