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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

#landlord #furniture #action
Dear landlord, I am writing you
this
 letter to complain about my disappointment regarding the apartment I have rented
last
 week from you in the centre city of London, more exactly in Backer street, apartment N°5. The house is not furnished and the kitchen
not
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 equipped like you said and agreed on the lease contract.
Thus
, the refrigerator is not working and the oven is missing.
Besides
, the cabinets do not have any doors and some of them are barely standing.
Furthermore
, the situation in the living room is much worse than I imagined. The couch is full of holes, scratches and smells extremely bad. Add to
this
, the television is not working and the dining table is missing a leg. I am asking you to act urgently and immediately by changing the damaged furniture with a new one and providing us with the missing furniture as soon as possible.
Otherwise
, I will cancel the contract and sue you in court. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Kind regards,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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