The media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public because it only has negative influences on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Some enhance
people
think that television should stop reporting lawlessness to the public . I hold that it would be arbitrary to take a superficial view and conclude that the news should become
to a halt. It believes that the coverage reporting minutiae of crimeal both Verb problem
come
advantage
and disadvantages. Many taxi-hailing companies Fix the agreement mistake
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begin
to select the Wrong verb form
have begun
driver'sbackground
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. It Fix the agreement mistake
functions
add
real-time positioning, recording and Change the verb form
adds
dialing
emergency contact telephone,to provide the public with a safe and secure ride condition. It believes that the coverage reporting minutiae of scandal to the public may hurt the Change the spelling
dialling
mass
. Fix the agreement mistake
masses
However
, reporting the misdeeds to the public also
has positive aspects. It
aware that Add a verb
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people
improve the public's alertness and safety awareness, thus
reducing the possibility of being killed. For example
, Many taxi-hailing companies begain
to select the driver. and improved the system, adding real-time positioning, recording, and Correct your spelling
began
begin
dialing
emergency contact numbers, to provide the public with a safe and secure ride. After learning about the report,especially women, will reduce going out alone at night, carry alarm equipment with them, and be alert and aware of taking a taxi. Change the spelling
dialling
Admiitly
, reporting Correct your spelling
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crime
to the publicAdd an article
the crime
a crime
which
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apply
bring
some negative to the public. it will Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
also
provide useful anti
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anti-crime
crime
experienceCorrect word choice
and
people
's ability to prevent crime
. The purpose of reporting crime
details is to give the public the right to know the whole truth. If the media stops reporting the details of crimes, it will leave the public in an ignorant and dangerous environment for a long time, as
resulting in many serious consequences. First of all, the radio's Change preposition
apply
behavior
of not telling the public the truth Change the spelling
behaviour
of
the event infringes Change preposition
about
people's
right to know. Some bureaucrats Change preposition
on people's
to
use their power to sweep that under the carpet. That makes Fix the infinitive
apply
the
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apply
people
blinded by the incomplete information reported by the media, and it is easy to form incorrect values. Besides
, there are deeper social problems behind some criminals. If the government does not know about these social problems, like enudaction
, Correct your spelling
education
and
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apply
people
will be in danger all the time. To sum up
, it is painess
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painful
televisions
to stop reporting to the public because it infringes on the public's own rights and puts Fix the agreement mistake
television
the
man and the whole society in unknown danger. essential information to prevent a similar atrocity. tCorrect article usage
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite