Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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should help

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poor

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who have not money or things to live

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life. Undoubtedly,

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notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. The upcoming paragraphs would cast light on my argument related to very conception. I wholeheartedly concur with the statement that those

people

who belong from 13 to 18 should do something for

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.

These myriad reason

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in favour of my argument, intelligent pupils should help to children those have

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house for living and they are lived in footpath side of the road. They have not money

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eat

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to food

then

how they start their

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in school. Pupils should help

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them in

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for unpaid because if they will educate they can achieve some good jobs and

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effect is

also

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a good

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impact on

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economy. To add a few more reason, how can one forget about?

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there is some

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have cons

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. To justify the some, there is

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of if juvenile doing unpaid work in

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the community

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they will face some problem. They are

also

student

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a student

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and they have not

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a lot

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lot

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of time. If they will go help for

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the community

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they can

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of

study

. Apart from all

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they will disappoint

from

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the

people

who are

also

working for

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the community

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. And they will see the

people

who cannot get

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a job

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from the Government and in good company. Even they are well educated and have

high

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degree from

university

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the university

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.

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is definitely

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impact on student. They will distract from their

study

. On a final note, I am of the opinion there are different pros and cons about help to

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the community

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as there is not any plausible argument against the very phenomenon.