You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

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Dear Dave, How are you and everyone at home? Hope you are doing great? I'm happy to tell you that I later went to the masquerade show that we talked about the

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time we saw. To be sincere, it wasn't planned, I went to the show with my mum .I later got to know that the community celebrated

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event every month of April of the year. It is a way of coming together for the local people of the community, they dance around the areas with the masquerade and their newly harvested crops. It is something

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interesting to watch. I'm very sure you would like to see

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event because it says something about the local community and how they celebrate their gods ,which I know is part of the courses you're doing in school. I'll be very glad if you can spare part of your time with me

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week for us both to see the final stage of the event.

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opportunity to catch up and spend time with each other and

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a way of learning for you . Take good care of yourself and I hope to see you soon Best wishes Temitope.

temitope.sabituMon Apr 12 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

203 words

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