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Many people think that parents should teach children how to behave. Others think that school is the best place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #parents #children #school #place #discuss
Now a days
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, upbringing matters a lot. In that
sense
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one
 group of people claim that it is
parents
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the parents
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 duty to pore good moral and values
in to
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 the
children
, whereas, others opine that it is wholly
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of
school
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the school
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.
Both
 have their own merits and drawbacks. On the
one
 hand, it is the foremost responsibility that
parents
 have to teach good behaviour and manners to the
children
. Because
,
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 the way guardian knows their
children
, no
one
 could do it better.
Moreover
,
parents
has
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 only
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the ability
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ability
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 to shape their
children
 in all
the
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aspects whether it is social and emotional. Which will happen in school as they have to teach in a group.
For instance
,
one
 anecdotal evidence says that
,
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 a
child
 with
well disciplined
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well-disciplined
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 have back support of their
parents
.
Hence
, it is advisable that voluntary involvement of the
parents
 will definitely help to create
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bizarre
bizzare
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 personality in a
child
.
On the other hand
,
parents
 can not afford time for their kids as
both
 are working and chasing ambitions. In that scenario, schools play a salient role in
childeren'
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children's
children
 life.
Additionally
, various institute
provide
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 diverse education; which will assist to make a
child
human
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 being. As schools emphasize
on
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both
 curriculum and extra-curriculum activities. Which inserts various values
in to
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 the
child
.
Thus
, educational institute
are
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 considered
as
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an
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essential. To conclude, for
overall
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the overall
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 development of a
child
both
parents
 and educational
institute
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institutions
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 have to work
all together
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.
Parents
 give social skills,
however
, school
focusses
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focuses
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 on
academic
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the academic
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 side.
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