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Families who do not send their children to public schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people argue that families with youngsters in private institutions should be exempted from paying taxes that fund universal schooling through the public school system. I disagree with
this
 opinion because it will deny the government the needed revenue to fund public learning. Granting tax exemption to families who send their children to private institutes would deny the less privileged child access to basic education.
This
 is because the funds needed to run these schools are derived from taxpayers money.
For instance
, Having both the rich and poor pay tax give the underprivileged juveniles reasons to attend school because tuition fees will be greatly reduced.
Therefore
, parents with youngsters in private institutions should be made to pay a tariff so that the underprivileged juvenile can have access to education.
Furthermore
, If taxes are not paid by people who send their children to private schools, it would deny the authority the needed revenue to fund public training. These folks are usually very rich and their contribution to the public purse is needed to sustain public institute.
For example
, Public institutes in Nigeria derive most of their funding from the authority. The government is able to do
this
 because of a policy that does not exclude anyone from paying their taxes.
That is
 to say that, folks with youngsters in the private academy should not be excluded from paying tariff so that the government will not be denied funds to equip the public schools. In conclusion,
although
 families with a juvenile in private institutions pay out of pocket for their offspring's education, I strongly believe that they should pay tax because it goes a long way in giving underprivileged children a chance at learning.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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