Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
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This
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disadvantages
that affect Use synonyms
people
's lives on the physical and psychological levels more than any expected advantage.
No doubt working for long Use synonyms
hours
have an advantage. To illustrate, some companies set the bonus for extra Use synonyms
hours
higher than the standard hourly pay, which makes a good opportunity for any worker to enhance his income.
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However
, working for long Linking Words
hours
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disadvantages
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Firstly
on the physical level, working long Linking Words
hours
has a devastating impact on the body. In general, working for too long cause exhaustion, which in turn decreases the person's ability to Use synonyms
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people
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for long Use synonyms
hours
sitting usually feel some pain in their backs and knees. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they do not have the Linking Words
time
to exercise or practice sports; Use synonyms
thus
, they develop numerous body malfunction symptoms. Linking Words
As a result
, the body suffers enormously from working for too long.
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Secondly
on the psychological level, not doing Linking Words
leisure
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activities
drive Use synonyms
people
to be depressed. Use synonyms
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people
usually interact in groups in any Use synonyms
activities
, and by depriving one's life of Use synonyms
leisure
, he stops interacting with Use synonyms
people
. In the long run, being in a constant state of solitude may lead to depression. Use synonyms
Moreover
, if a person does not spend Linking Words
time
doing enjoyable Use synonyms
activities
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such
as hobbies, he will be sad most of the times; Linking Words
consequently
, he will be unsettled emotionally. Linking Words
Thus
, the lack of entertainment threatens the individual's mental health.
To conclude, spending long Linking Words
hours
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work
and less Use synonyms
time
on Use synonyms
leisure
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activities
is a situation with more Use synonyms
disadvantages
than advantages. On one hand, the advantage is gaining extra money, Use synonyms
On the other hand
, it carries some Linking Words
disadvantages
. Namely, it negatively affects Use synonyms
people
physically by creating several diseases, and psychologically by depriving them of having balanced mental health. Those Use synonyms
disadvantages
outweigh any potential advantages.Use synonyms
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