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There is a significant gap between rich and poor countries. Some people think that richer countries should be responsible for supporting poorer countries while others think it is the responsibility of the poorer countries. What is your opinion?

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The gap between the wealthy population and the indigent ones has increased over the
last
 few years.
Therefore
, it is often argued if the
first
 ones should support economically the less fortunate or not. In my opinion, I think they should, even if they are not obligated by the law to do so.
Firstly
, in many poor
countries
,
people
 face hunger, a lack of clear water, dangerous health conditions, and a lack of housing. Citizens in
such
 regions have no opportunity to live a healthy and happy
life
, they have poor health and a low
life
 expectancy. Quality of
life
 in
such
countries
 is
also
 extremely low. Rich
countries
 can easily support
such
 nations. It will help to relieve their problems, will improve healthcare, and increase the quality of
life
. In Africa,
for example
, many
people
 suffer from gastrointestinal diseases, which are the leading cause of premature death there, and not big sums of money are needed for their prevention.
Secondly
, supporting the poor regions will help to boost the world\s economy on the whole.
People
 in developing
countries
 will have the opportunity to live and to work longer.
Such
 citizens will have the possibilities to buy goods and products.
Consequently
, rich
countries
 will effectively increase their markets all around the globe.
For instance
, it is shown that economic investment causes financial growth in many developing
countries
 all around the world. To conclude, the economic gap between
countries
 has numerous negative effects on all the
people
 on our planet. Developed
countries
 should support poor nations because it will positively affect the wellbeing of their
people
 and will boost the world\s economy.
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