Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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the increased temperature

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human's

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activities on earth must

be halt

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with the contribution of the authorities.

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notion is favoured by some

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of

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society, others have a counter-argument that to tackle the indicated serious issue people have to take some actions. I personally believe that both have their own importance

to stop

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global warming.

Initially

, my essay will demonstrate the role of government and

then

argue

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public responsibilities towards it.

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with, the

uses

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of fossil fuels by

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industries

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at

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large scale and exhaust fumes

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from huge uses of private means of transportation by the people could be halted when there

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solid

law

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employed by the

authority

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against

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of these resources.

As a result

, to avoid any high penalty

human

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will reduce

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usage .

For instance

, a survey conducted recently has revealed that 40% of pollution can be minimized globally if society follows the issued law and order with responsibility.

Therefore

, by applying legal terms changes in climate can be stopped for the long term.

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it is an individual's responsibility as well to maintain the earth's climate. The major contribution of humans is that they must travel in public transportation rather than their own vehicles.

Thus

, it will decrease the level of exhaust fumes which are harmful to our atmosphere. To illustrate, commuting by metro or

buses

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not only helps to reduce the use of dangerous energy sources

such

as oil or gas but

also

solve

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the traffic congestion problem.

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, the environmentally friendly demeanour

assist

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to reduce

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the temperature of the earth's surface.

To conclude

,

government's

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laws could bring major changes in society and following these laws as responsible citizens

public

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could reduce global warming.

Overall

, in my opinion, authorities and communities have to work simultaneously to solve the major issue and get back to nature.