Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that may cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam" How true do you think this statement is? What measurement can government take to avoid this.
In
past
three decades, Correct article usage
the past
car
sell is increased significantly due to that most cities
in the world are facing traffic
jam
problems. In my opinion
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,opinion
this
statement is true as most of the families are having car
these days and some of them are using multiple cars
for daily commute.
Number
of jobs are increased particularly in big Change the article
The number
cities
and people
owning more cars
. These cars
are used for daily commute to the workplace and ultimately causing a traffic
jam
. Many families are having multiple working members and all of them use individuals vehicles. As household is increased people
are started preferring individual commute rather than public transport
. To the addition of this
number
of roads are same in most of the cities
as comparison
to Add an article
a comparison
cars
hence
more traffic
jam
situation. These days car
is also
a status symbol in some countries. That is
also
resulting
high rate of Add the preposition
inresulting
car
selling. For example
high
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a high
the high
number
of car
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the car
a car
are
noticed in New York as Change the verb form
is
comparison
to three decades back.
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a comparison
On the other hand
, there are many measures government can take to reduce the traffic
jam
in big cities
. To ensure availability of public transport
, if public transport
is available easily people
might use less number
of cars
. To directing companies to provide transport
facility to their employee, this
will reduce traffic
on the road significantly. By promoting carpooling, multiple people
can commute in one car
and this
can drastically reduce car
ownership as individuals don't need their own car
. Government can apply some taxes on car
purchases like road tax, pollution tax, that
might help to Correct pronoun usage
which
reducing
Change the verb form
reduce
car
ownership.
To concludes, Increased number
of car
ownership causing traffic
jam
in measure cities
. Governments should take measures like availability of public transport
, educate people
about traffic
congestion in cities
and pollution. Impose taxes on car
purchase.Add an article
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