Private car ownership has grown dramatically in recent years. This led to a rise in traffic congestion. What could governments and individuals do to reduce congestion?

In the 21st century, as the world’s population has risen consumerization of private
cars
increased leading to roads being blocked by
cars
. In my perspective, using public transport as a solution is not effective,
therefore
, government and individuals could find more successful ways to reduce congestion. Building upper and lower level roads on the highways decrease the
number
of
cars
creating a
traffic
jam.
For example
, Eastern Asian countries as South Korea and Japan built multiple levels on the road to avoid the crowding of vehicles. In that way, people driving in one direction won’t face congestions.
Instead
of expanding road by using free lands,
this
method will be effective for any country to reduce
traffic
jam. The program of hiring an automobile offers a practical choice for drivers shortening the usage of private vehicles. According to that, the user could get a car by an app for a time and
then
, others could hire the same car which will reduce the
number
of
cars
in the city. In my opinion, if the program will have an affordable price and comfort, many people will use the offer
instead
of purchasing
cars
of their own.
Therefore
, if there are only a few
cars
traffic
congestion won’t rise. To sum up, government and individuals by working together can shorten the
number
of private
cars
. If the rebuilding of roads will allow to reduce
traffic
jam, not owning but hiring a vehicle decreases the
number
of
cars
. In a similar way, people can avoid congestions on the highways.
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