Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Advertisements
could be found anywhere in our daily lives. In my opinion, the current prevalence of advertising is a positive development for companies and a negative development for
customers
. On the one hand, publicity
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a powerful tool of competition for
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. Advertising stimulates demand, expands the scale of production and in turn reduces the cost of production per unit.
This
not only increases profit but
also
creates a competitive pricing advantage for
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of advertised
products
.
In addition
, since it pays to advertise, advertised
products
are usually of good, if not the best quality.
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, a company would emphasize improving the condition of
products
before advertising, which
also
helps to create a trustworthy brand image among purchaser.
However
, advertising is so common that it now becomes useless and a nuisance to
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.
First
,
customers
are often bombarded with
advertisements
of the same product, making it increasingly challenging for them to believe the advertising message if all companies claim they provide the best service or quality
products
.
As a result
, buyers now often turn to their friends or acquaintances for recommendations, which renders advertising ineffective.
In addition
, due to constant repetition, people have now developed an aversion to
advertisements
and try to get rid of them as much as possible.
For example
, most viewable media platforms like YouTube or Netflix are now using the removal of
advertisements
as the unique selling points to attract new
customers
, implying the audience’s hostile attitude toward advertising. In conclusion, I believe advertising could assist companies in generating
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and improving product quality.
However
, due to their prevalence,
advertisements
are becoming less effective as
customers
not only struggle to believe the advertising messages but
also
try to avoid them as much as possible.
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