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In some countries increasing number of people are suffering from from health problems result of eating too much fast foods government should impose higher taxes on them on what extent do you agree or disagree with this

#countries #people #health #foods #government #taxes
There is an idea that raising
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governmental taxes on junk
food
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 main reason
of
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 different illnesses may decrease the number of people who have
health
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 problem. Personally, I do not totally agree, because supposed action may lead to economic issues in states.
To begin
 with
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 suggestion which indeed could improve
physical
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 state of
population
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. Today a lot of people prefer to eat fast
food
 which is
harmfulfor
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harmful for
 their
health
.
For example
, approximately 45% of American citizens have
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obesity because of frequent eating of junk
food
.
Thus
, growth of
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taxes
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 meal in countries, as the USA possibly make
situation
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 better. In spite of
such
 action can have a
possitive
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positive
 impact on
health
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 of
population
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, there are could be several negative effects.
First
 of all, if humans do not stop
to eat
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 and buy fast
food
, they will have to increase their living
expancy
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expectancy
 and it can make
worse
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 financial situation in society.
In addition
, some people probably do not understand
this
 measure, why government raise
price
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 on their favourite and cheap meal.
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may
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cause
to
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social demonstrations. So, the raising of
taxex
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taxes
 can be dangerous. In conclusion,
authority
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 of some countries may try to improve
health
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the health
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 of
population
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 in their states by escalating prices on fast
food
,
however
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 we should not forget about
possibly
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 consequences
such
 as the falling level of
economy
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the economy
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 and social protests.
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