Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries in the world are facing different types of problems and challenges, limited not up to the environment, but, Increase in
population
and education and many more others.
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contry
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country
India
will face in
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ten years.
India
is a developing
country
. It comes
in to
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the list of top 10 countries with the largest
population
in the whole world. There are 120 billion
people
living in
India
. there are various kinds of challenges
India
is facing right now.
Firstly
, the literacy rate in our
country
is less than 50
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, because of
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part of
population
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living in
rural
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area. Due to
this
reason, they are not able to get the education they need, which makes
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tough task for the government to provide
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information and convince
people
for their own betterment.
However
, with the help of our Prime Minister and his team's brilliant ideas of "Digital
India
",
people
have started getting literate by online education. By making mobile phones cheap and data cheaper,
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can buy them easily and can start studying through online classes
Furthermore
, because of
larger
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population
, unemployment has always been the bigger challenge to face. Prise of the commodities are getting expensive and the jobs are getting cheaper, so it is becoming tough to earn and raise a family because of
this
expensis
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expenses
. Because of
this
frustration,
people
have started to leave the
country
and relocate to western countries for better
oppportunities
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opportunities
. But, because of the increase in demand
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jobs, multinational companies
such
as Tesla, Amazon etc. have started investing in our
country
, which will raise many jobs for the needed and
finally
able to solve the problem of unemployment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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