Social media is having a negative impact on people's lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your answer with reasons and examples.

Social
media
is the platform where it is very easy to
acess
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access
all the information which is prohibited it has
also
changed the way
people
interact with each other,
although
i
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believe
this
might be beneficial for some individuals but I agree that it has various harmful impacts on the society .
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few examples of the negative impact of the social
media
On one hand , Social
media
has made communications and interactions with different
people
from different nation very easy that individuals do not hesitate to take a step forward and make new friends .
However
, there are some negative effects which include identity theft, cyberbullying, decreased social interaction in real
life
, and social isolation. An increase in mobile social networking could possibly cause future health problems.
For instance
, As young generation nowadays are very much familiar with the technologies and have accounts on various sites
such
as Facebook , Instagram there is no age limit mentioned on these sites it
Thus
, children can get access to some dangerous material online which not safe
this
shows that how social
media
has so much of influence on today's society.
On the other hand
, According to the Univerisity of North Carolina in 2011 researchers observed that there is a lot of difference when it it comes to social
media
and individuals personal
life
. Social
media
itself is not the problem. It is the way
people
use it in place of actual communication and in-person socializing. “Friends” on social
media
may not actually be friends, and may even be strangers. To illustrate , the term "real
life
and reel
life
" was invited in 2012 which showed that what
people
show on social sites is not exactly about their real
life
. As a ,
result
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Excessive use of social
media
makes one socially isolated and lonely than those who are not
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frequent user of
this
technology. In conclusion,
Although
I believe social
media
have a dark side that led
people
to do horrible things to themself and others . local communities should try and involve with local
people
of local society in order to promote the future of the community
life
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