All education should be free to all people and pasid and maneged by the government

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conception I totally wholehearted concur with the statement literacy is very important for everyone
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scholarship, in ,addition the world search showed that which agrarian has lack of source of
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those countries economy is very down
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many people have not many money to eat Mail but their children are very intelligent and sharp in every word but they cannot afford to
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every individual can help to the nation for growth. Hey to add a few more reasons how can a
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some cons of free discipline the most prominent
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appointed some teachers in the institute the hey
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democracy in the economy All in all, I would like to say that teaching is more important to provide in every country
this
is definitely to help in the rise of the nation in the ultramodern epoch it is the point of debate on the ministry should pay free for inspection and manage it learning play a very important role in every individual. Hey
this
notion remains successful in keeping the majority in
this
favour the upcoming paragraph would cast shade on my argument related to
very
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the very
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conception I totally wholehearted concur with the statement
education
is very important for everyone
firstly
, if the government will provide free
education
then
anybody can get an
education
, in ,addition the world search showed that which country has lack of source of discipline those countries recession is very down
Secondly
many people have not many money to eat Mail but their children are very intelligent and sharp in every word but they cannot afford to
study
if the
authority
will build many colleges school for class
then
every individual can help to the nation for success. Hey to add a few more reasons how can a
one
forget about there are
also
some cons of free improvement the most prominent
one
is a lot of public will not take seriously for
study
to some extent the state
also
have appointed some teachers in the institute the hey
authority
also
have to pay more expensive it will definitely affect on a population in
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All in all, I would like to say that discipline is a more important to provide in every country
this
is definitely to help in the growth of the tribe
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