Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The issue of advertising business has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that marketing and
promotional
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product is
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good way
to
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influenced
people
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to purchase
it
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.
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, others insist on the opinion that the advertisements are not popular because
people
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find them repetitive. Viewing from general perspectives,
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viewpoints
and I
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personally
following the
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former
opinion by
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reason.
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with, commercial activities are the common means of mediation to
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the
products
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due to the
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of advertising.
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, the advertising campaigns appear
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of
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social
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networking sites
such
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as TV or online which
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expose
everyday
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to
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apply
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entertainment or
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.
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, according to statistics, Youtube and Facebook are displayed the most of advertising that relevant to promote the
products
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or services when
people
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are watching a movie or daily shop.
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, advertisers strike to make unique and memorable marketing contents in order to persuade the potential customers to purchase advertised
products
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.
For instance
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, the popular Nike’ Just Do It slogan has attracted a lot of purchasers to buy their shoes so that their sales and profits have increased significantly.
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,
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the growth of technology, marketers could analyze easily the needs of customer and make more creative advertisement.
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, a large of number individuals have
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a negative
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attitude towards advertising since they repeat on social networking sites
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such
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as billboards on
internet
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the internet
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.
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, in reality,
people
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tend to buy more
products
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when they have seen the
advertings
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adverts
advertising
so that advertisement influences
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the
decidement
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decedent
decadent
of customers. In conclusion, adverts being the best method of promoting
products
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and services, it does influence
people
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in buying the
products
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. Advancement in the advertisement
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done at a very good pace and will continue to develop in coming years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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