Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Book rooms either public or
privte
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private
squander for nation's valuable assets and funds and it must be replaced with developed technology known as
computers
.
Although
this
notion is favoured by one
parts
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of the society, in my
opinion
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these machines cannot overcome
to
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the ancient way of spending time in
libraries
.
Initially
,
this
essay will demonstrate the role of
libraries
to
develope
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develop
social life and
then
it will argue that major benefit to access of unmilited
materials
for
readers
by
computers
.
To begin
with,
libraries
have played
crucial
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a crucial
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role to establish a strong bond with society since past eras. While visiting these book homes people share their thoughts with each
others
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other
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about authors and topics of reading
materials
. They receive human
assitance
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assistance
in
libraries
to clear their doubts rather than robotics.
As a result
, they
develope
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develop
developed
their social circle during
discussion
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a discussion
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with
experinced
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experienced
readers
.
For instance
, a survey conducted recently by Cambridge University has revealed that 69% of the world population tend to spend at least an hour per day in
libraries
to obtain new ideas from
books
and their
experties
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expertise
.
Therefore
, these reading places help to sustain
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environment among communities.
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,
the
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cutting-edge technology provides online reading facility to
public
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the public
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through
computers
.
This
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features contain
huge
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a huge
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store of
books
to use without any restrictions and
readers
of these
materials
do not have to wait for
long
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a long
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time to
availablity
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availability
of
books
after returning from other users. They can read any of their
favorite
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favourite
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authors just by a click on
computer
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the computer
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.
Consequently
, search engines in
this
machine give access
of
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million of reading
materials
to their
readers
.
For example
, American researchers found that the majority of
young
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the young
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generation using their
computers
or tablets to study general awareness
books
and
course related
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course-related
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materials
.
Hence
,
this developments
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this development
these developments
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beneficial for those who required quick access
of
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to
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books
. To conclude,
libraries
and
computers
are have different kind of features for their
readers
.
However
, people not only lose their concentration while reading
on screen
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on-screen
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but
cost
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the cost
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of buying
this
machine
also
unaffordable for everyone.
Thus
, I believe that
development
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the development
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of
libreries
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libraries
around the world
does
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not
wastw
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waste
want
countrie's
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country's
countries
resources and wealth to make
this
society more friendly and give benefits to their users.
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