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Teachers are not as imortant as they used to be because of the choice of other alternatives for students,such as online teching.To what extent do yo agree of disagree?

#teachers #imortant #choice #alternatives #students #yo
teachers
 are the best guide one can have because of knowledge and experience.
students
donot
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do not
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 find it
inetresting
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interesting
 unlike it provide them
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knowlwdge
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knowledge
 whereas other sources
also
 available to them.
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, online teaching course one
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therefore
need
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 personal
guidiance
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guidance
 in academics. let us find out whether
students
 require either online sources or just rely on teaching practices offline.
teachers
 are
important
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 pillar of academic institutions
since past
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 many centuries.
although
 it is considered that children should attend classes physical rather than offline to gain
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knowledge
.in recent times not only teaching is in trend but online courses are there to help
students
 to understand things better. online teaching
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also
 plays
important
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 role provided
students
 pay attention to it properly. it is an
open source
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 to interact with different
teachers
 whereas
old
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the old
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 method is restricted to
few
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a few
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 of them. since
internet
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is arrived
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 so technology has improved both of them are significant for teaching institution to reach out
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 more
students
. do these teaching courses really
helped
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 to make children better? it remains a wise question whether we are able to deliver things properly not only
rich
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students
 as well as to the poor
students
. in
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modern-day
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modern
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 day it is important to use technology just we use other things in life.
threfore
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therefore
 we need to understand not just
teachers
 perspective but
also
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studemts
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students
 in that case.
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