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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#world #shortage #food #think #foods
It is believed that most
of
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developing countries
depends
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 upon agriculture
for example
 India. In
this
 contemporary era lesson quantity of the
food
 become one of the major concern in
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society. Few individuals of society asserted that
this
 unpleasant situation can be resolved by modified
foods
. I am in complete accord with the given notion and the reasons for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs. To
beign
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begin
being
 with, there are numerous factors to
favor
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this
 ideology.
First
 and
the
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formost
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foremost
, increasing
pouplution
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population
pollution
 leads to cover more
area
 to reside
altimately
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ultimately
,
agricultural
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area
 will be covered to
develope
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develop
 new
socities
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societies
 which
escates
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escapes
escalates
 the factor of
food
 scarcity. To explicate, as
number
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 of people increases, more
area
 will be
accupied
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occupied
accepted
 to
dwel
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dwell
,
lesson
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a lesson
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 the opportunity to harvest more
food
. To cite an example, as per
survey
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a survey
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 conducted by United Nations Census Bureau in 2018, 80% of field
area
 covered by
near by
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 cities in China to construct new
socities
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societies
cities
.
Therefore
, it is great evidence that due to reducing
quality
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 of
food
 people should use modified
foods
 to survive. In
addtion
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addition
, it is apparent that scarcity of
foods
 appearing all over the world due to a drop in agricultural productivity. Insects and pests are the main factors for damaging crops,
food
 production or parasitizing livestock, leading to a lack of annual harvests. To explain, by the use of unnatural products
foods
 quality goes down.
Consequently
, the markets will face an inadequate amount of fruits, vegetables or meat to meet customer’s demands.
Hence
, individuals of society bound to eat genetically modified
foods
 to satiate their fundamental needs to live in the world.
For instance
, as per recent research done by the Indian newspaper "The Hindu",
largest
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 rice and wheat producing state Uttar Pardesh
diminshed
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diminished
 their
food
 products by 80% by using
new
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 technology of
pestesides
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pesticides
 in their
food
 plants. Thereby, it can be shown from
above
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 point that in
this
 modern time people have to face
this
 unpleasant
senario
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scenario
 of
food
. ALternatively, it becomes
imerative
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imperative
 use genetically modified
foods
. To recapitulate, owing to reasons
such
 as covering of land for
dweling
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dwelling
 more population and
detrimantal
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detrimental
 effects of chemical leads to scarcity of
food
, I
am totally agree
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 with those who opine that genetically modified
foods
 are
a
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viable measures to cope up with
above
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 harsh situation.
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