Data on sensor position and emitted pollutants were acquired in a single room space to establish a pollutant database through long-term continuous measurement.

Data on sensor position and emitted pollutants were acquired in a single room space to establish a pollutant database through long-term continuous measurement. To establish
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database, five types of flooring database and nine types of indoor air pollutants were used. Positioning data were immediately transmitted to the MEMS sensing instrument via Bluetooth to
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connection of Beacon and WEB APPs, data were integrated into the IoT information platform, using various mobile phones and computers. In the future, the information model can be extended to entire-building recognition, and the use of building space can save
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costs and shorten the operation time.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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