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In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Some
people
 believe that in the
next
decades
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people
 will rely solely on the Internet to search for information. In my
opinion
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 the consumption of online content will dramatically increase over the
next
 few years, but
books
 and magazines will continue to be bought by readers. It is true that the fruition of printed newspapers and
books
 has decreased since the birth of blogs, online newspapers and ebooks. Indeed, it is a matter of fact that reading online is definitely more convenient for several reasons.
For
example
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 a great deal of information is accessible without paying a fee.
Moreover
, online
books
 and newspapers can be brought with
yourself
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 all together just by having a smart device, despite
books
 that take up a lot of space.
On the other hand
,
books
 and magazines will not be completely replaced. Indeed, a great number of
people
 claim that they prefer holding a book rather than read it through a screen.
In addition
, a huge number of
people
 love to collect their favourite romance
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 their bookshelf and build a personal library in their house. In conclusion,
people
 will surely read more online in the future,
in particular
 when they would like to search for information fastly or have to consult plenty of different sources - that if they were to purchase it they would spend a fortune.
Conversely
, they will continue to buy
books
 and magazines only if owning them physically represents an added value for them.
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