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As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree with such a procedure? Have you any reservations?

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The idea of cloning humans may soon become a viable option due to the latest technological advancements. While
this
 idea may sound problematic for some, it is considered
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 for others.
This
 essay completely agrees that cloning human beings is a step in the right direction, mainly because it may save lives and help to improve the quality of many others.
First
 and foremost, cloning humans in order to use their spare parts will probably save the lives of a great number of people in the future.
This
 is simply because unfortunately there are numerous diseases that can be cured only by transplantation of various
organs
.
For example
, a patient who is diagnosed with a rare form of liver
fialure
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liver transplantation in order to survive, and cloning may give him the liver that he needs, without waiting years for
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 right donor.
Secondly
, using different
organs
 from human cloning can help individuals who lost their own
organs
 to improve their well being. For crippeled people who lack one or more of their
organs
, many everyday tasks can be difficult to be carried out, and
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 there is no available solution for their struggle.
For instance
, a soldier who lost his hands in battle may be able to function normally again after he receives a new pair of hands, following his cloning and the creation of new body parts. In conclusion, I strongly believe that cloning humans and using spare body parts can help not only to save a great
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 of lives in the future
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 but
also
 to improve the quality of others who suffer from various medical conditions.
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