Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

More and more
crimes
are committed by youngsters all over the globe. There are many causes behind
this
negative development and there are
also
a
lot
of methods to tackle the issue. Behind
this
movement lie a
lot
of reasons.
To begin
with, with the introduction of the Internet, teenagers are more vulnerable to inappropriate
information
.
For example
, on social media platforms
such
as Facebook, many posts related to violence and sexual content every day.
In addition
, with the
amount
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of stress students are having from schools, they can
be easily influence
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by any external factors,
such
as
information
and movies. To give an example, watching a violent film can encourage teenagers to commit
crimes
,
such
as motor racing. The governments can apply different ways to deal with the problem.
Firstly
, by blocking some websites that can encourage youth
crimes
, the rate can go down. To illustrate, a
lot
of websites in my country is prohibited because they contain unsuitable
information
.
Furthermore
, governments can
also
spend more
in
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education to teach youngsters that committing
crimes
are bad and
dishonorable
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dishonourable
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.
For example
, my school has organized a
lot
of programs to educate us that we must not commit
crimes
. In summary, crime rates among teenagers are rising due to access to websites containing violence and inappropriate
information
, and the issue can be dealt with through the prohibition put on unsuitable sites and more educational programs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • surge
  • productive activities
  • quality education
  • social media
  • peer pressure
  • economic disparity
  • disadvantaged backgrounds
  • legitimate means
  • inclusive education
  • mentorship
  • community policing
  • youth engagement
  • early intervention
  • constructive pathways
  • social services
  • at-risk families
  • root causes
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