An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. what problem does this cause? what can be done to deal with this situation?
Now a days
, Correct the word
Nowadays
growing
number of Correct article usage
a growing
skilled
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a skilled
specialist
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specialists
such
as teaching professionals and doctors, engineers are moving from their native to developed countries
to work .This
essay will discuss about
the main problems associated with Remove the preposition
apply
this
transition and suggest a viable solution.
Firstly
, the skilled specialist
people
are moving to work and live in developed countries
, because they are earning huge
salary and decent Add an article
a huge
life style
which is not able to Correct your spelling
lifestyle
provided
by the poorer Change the form of the verb
provide
countries
. How ever
it will create a massive shortage of skilled Correct your spelling
However
specialist
. these factors might create a
extensive impact Change the article
an
of
economic growth, and Change preposition
on
People
are forcing to travel to other countries
in order to get sensitive medical treatment . For example
, last
month one private television channel conducted one survey, its saying that people
are travelling to Singapore, America, and U.k for treatment such
as cancer and heart related
issues, which will make trouble to them mentally and financially. Add a hyphen
heart-related
Secondly
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,
are
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is
not
ready to invest Rewrite the sentence
apply
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in
under developed
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underdeveloped
countries
due to shortage
of Correct article usage
a shortage
Skilled
professionals.
A solution to Correct your spelling
skilled
this
problem is government should fix the high pay scale to
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for
the
skilled professionals Correct article usage
apply
such
as teachers, doctors and engineers. Addition
to that government can give free standard education and medical support to their family members. Change preposition
In addition
For instance
, one latest news survey report saying that Australia, Canada, and New Zealand countries
are providing free education and free medical to the people
. So limited people
only migrating to other countries
. As a
result
these Add a comma
,result
countries
are growing massively. Furthermore
these Add a comma
,Furthermore
countries
giving permanent residence to other country skilled specialist
in order to develop their countries
among the world.
To conclude, in my opinion government
should make strong policies and plans to stop the skills Correct article usage
the government
specialist
migrating
from their own Change preposition
from migrating
countries
.This
can be solved through standard education and free medical insurance to them and their family with decent
Correct article usage
a decent
life style
.Correct your spelling
lifestyle
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