Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to inquire about the different kinds of

gym

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memberships available at your establishment,

along with

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their respective costs and

their

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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benefits. I have recently moved to

this

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city, and I am someone who enjoys swimming, running and intense

workout

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workouts

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hence

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, I have decided to continue my routine with your

gym

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. Despite searching online on your website, I could not find the information about the prices and various activities your

gym

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offers.

Therefore

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, I would request you to provide me with the various membership programs

as well as

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their monthly fees.

Also

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, I have heard that your

gym

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provide

Correct subject-verb agreement

provides

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sauna and steam facilities, so are those included in the package?

Also

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, I would be

greatful

Correct your spelling

grateful

Punctuation problem

apply

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if you could explain the joining procedures and any documents needed for the enrollment. Thank you for your assistance

and

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, and

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I look forward to your response. Yours

Faithfully

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faithfully

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, Ketul Shah

ketulshah2825

Sep 13, 2025

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structure

Divide the letter into clear parts. A start state why you write, a middle with your questions, and an end that says thank you.

content

The letter asks all four key questions (types, prices, activities, joining steps).

tone

Polite tone and good manners shown.

structure

Gives a clear purpose at the start.

format

Closing is proper and respectful.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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