You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am Viraj Pandya a veteran army officer from the Indian navy. I am writing
this
letter to seek information about the tour “The blue Himalayas”. I found
this
info at the coffee shop in the brochure. Being a veteran I couldn’t visit the place,
however
, my service at the Siachian peak had always kept me connected with the icy glaciers. The open sky of zillion stars always reminds me of my childhood days and peak’s beautiful morning with golden sun lights blooms a rejuvenating day. Since the brochure has only information regarding the place. I am very keen to know the detailed tour structures, and its time plus how much will be the expense. It will be great if you drop me an email or text me a message or let me know the name of your website if you have any. I
also
would like to inform you that I am recovering from my post-fracture injury, due to that I might be incompetent to take part in the tour,
however
, I am always ready to work on my fitness level. Once I will receive all the necessary information regarding the travel I will work on my cardio and muscular fitness. That will surely support me in
this
future event. Anyways, I am looking forward to knowing more about
this
. Thank you. Best Regards, Viraj Pandya
Submitted by Viraj on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: