The use of recreational drugs is on the increase, especially among young people. Describe the reasons for this worrying issue and provide suggestions to minimize it.

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Nowadays,
the
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teenagers and adults are taking
drugs
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as a passion and
habits
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,
this
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problem is becoming deteriorating. The pros and cons
about
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it are mentioned below. In
this
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modern era,
people
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are becoming very advanced and updating themselves day by day. There are many reasons about
people
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are doing bad
habits
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like
drugs
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, smoking , and many more. The
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reason is,
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days
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young
people
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are living
very
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modern life. They are enjoying all the moments of life but at some
extect
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extent
few persons getting
stress
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at all the moment which habit makes
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sad and lonely.
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,
the
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survey which was conducted by google, 70%
citizens
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are adopting
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worst
habits
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like
drugs
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due to their breakup with their partner and some are for their works and home stress.
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, the
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reason is, some bad humans
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to spread nuisance in
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nation
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due to their bad
perpose
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purpose
they
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to convince youngers and giving them
drugs
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and doing bad works with them helps.
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year times of
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make a survey and in that they proved that
,
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60% to 70% nuisance is spreading by youngers in all the
nation
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.
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problem is becoming
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huge so
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this
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days government and some charities are taking steps about to
deacrease
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decrease
it. The government is doing lots of work on it like advertising good
mesaage
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message
about it in television
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strictly taking steps if someone is kept with
drugs
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in
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nation
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and
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check all the tourists which one is coming from
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of the country. While
,
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numbers of
organisation
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the organisation
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is
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is also activated
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also
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activate to minimise the ratio of
people
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who takes
drugs
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.
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,
this
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type of groups
are
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spread
news
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in
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nation
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the nation
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to take awareness about it.
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, they have
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some doctors helps who want to come back from
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type of bad
habits
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. In my opinion,
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problem is very dangerous and citizens should not try
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type of intoxic
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products
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it's impact
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on their body very badly.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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