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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

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It is undeniable fact that population is upsurging day-by-day and in
this
 contemporary
era
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 everyone is so busy in their life that they do not have much time to pay attention to themselves from
hectic
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the hectic
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 schedule
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, as a result,
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as a result
 they may become the victim of many health disorder one of the most prominent is obesity.
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 substantiate the impacts and reason
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this
 digressing trend. To initiate with,
myriad
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 of things are involved in the problem. Due to the changing lifestyle of the
people
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 they may indulge in many bad works.
Consequently
,may
engrossed
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 in many
healty
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healthy
health
disease
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 and they can't able to control being fat. Eating unhealthy may rise to obesity.
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Recent
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 survey illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
children
 who use to eat unhealthy food daily. Almost 90%of youngsters eating street food which directly affects their health.
In addition
 to
this
, sitting for long hours is another the most detrimental cause of
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overweight
children
.
Children
 use to see the television and by using
excessive
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 amount of mobile phones may
affects
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 their health. Moving
further
, by using mobile phones for long hours their lifestyle will totally change. Their studying habits are devastating. They are not able to concentrate on their studies
as a result
 they will have to face failure in their assignments. Due to
overweight
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 they can't able to wear
clothers
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clothes
 properly and sometimes they cannot find clothes of their size and they have to face many difficulties. To exemplify, when a
children
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 has to go somewhere on any
occassion
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occasion
 by watching other people clothes and
fitnes
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fitness
 he
feel
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 demotivated owing to suicide etc. To summarise, one should take care of their living standard and he should consume things in
such
 a way that it will not create any bad effects because excess of everything is bad.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overweight
  • obesity
  • caloric intake
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • screen time
  • physical education
  • nutritious
  • psychological well-being
  • self-esteem
  • socioeconomic
  • healthcare system
  • life expectancy
  • obesity-related complications
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