Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community do you agree or disagree?
There is a certain group of persons who reckons that rather than deploying culprits into the some
prison
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work
for aiding Use synonyms
society
. I am in accord with the Use synonyms
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statement where offenders would be allowed to doing social Linking Words
work
for the community. I will illustrate my perspectives with suitable examples in the following paragraphs.
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society
because of their deeds which have an adverse effect on Use synonyms
society
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cases
the situation becomes worst, Use synonyms
hence
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the
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society
as doing volunteer Use synonyms
work
. For illustrate, in our city, Ahmedabad, A group of lawbreakers come forward and do cleaning works at public places over the weekends.
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This
type of development can be diminished the Linking Words
delinquincy
of the criminal and Correct your spelling
delinquency
some
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in some
cases
they can not do crimes again. Use synonyms
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such
actions not only change the nature of criminal but Linking Words
also
helps to the Linking Words
society
in a broader way.
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Furthermore
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prison
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society
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government
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the government
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such
culprits do not understand the impact of the crime which they Linking Words
done
earlier. But, government take appropriate actions against them Add the auxiliary verb
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prison
, allowing them to do some educational Use synonyms
work
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that
helped
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the
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society
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For example
, Kiran Bedi, a Linking Words
first
lady IPS(Indian Police Services) officer who guided more than 100 Linking Words
of
criminals and after that they become social activists to support the government school's students in their educations. As a consequence, the number of criminal Change preposition
apply
cases
reduced in the Tihar district and the literacy rate of young children increase drastically due to Use synonyms
such
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work
which Use synonyms
as
done
by the Correct your spelling
was
law breakers
.
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lawbreakers
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criminal
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society
, Use synonyms
hence
putting all of them into Linking Words
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prison
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which
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apply
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cases
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