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Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community do you agree or disagree?

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There is a certain group of persons who reckons that rather than deploying culprits into the
prison
, a few of them should be given an opportunity to do volunteering
work
 for aiding
society
. I am in accord with the
second
 statement where offenders would be allowed to doing social
work
 for the community. I will illustrate my perspectives with suitable examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
although
 delinquents are useless for
society
 because of their deeds which have an adverse effect on
society
,
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in
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some
cases
 the situation becomes worst,
hence
 people can not resist them from doing crime. Sometimes, these people can be changed by guiding them to do some social actions towards
the
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society
 as doing volunteer
work
. For illustrate, in our city, Ahmedabad, A group of lawbreakers come forward and do cleaning works at public places over the weekends.
Moreover
,
This
 type of development can be diminished the
delinquincy
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 of the criminal and
some
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in some
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cases
 they can not do crimes again.
As a result
, by taking
such
 actions not only change the nature of criminal but
also
 helps to the
society
 in a broader way.
Furthermore
, putting offenders like pocket pickers, theifs, etc. into
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prison
 can not beneficial for
the
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society
 as well as
government
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the government
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,
thus
such
 culprits do not understand the impact of the crime which they
done
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did
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 earlier. But, government take appropriate actions against them
such
 as
instead
 of putting them into
the
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prison
, allowing them to do some educational
work
which
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that
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 can be
helped
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helpful
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 to
the
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society
.
For example
, Kiran Bedi, a
first
 lady IPS(Indian Police Services) officer who guided more than 100
of
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criminals and after that they become social activists to support the government school's students in their educations. As a consequence, the number of criminal
cases
 reduced in the Tihar district and the literacy rate of young children increase drastically due to
such
 volunteer's
work
 which
as
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was
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 done by the
law breakers
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lawbreakers
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. To conclude, Every
criminals
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criminal
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 are not bad for
the
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society
,
hence
 putting all of them into
the
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prison
which
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can not be an excellent idea for anyone.
However
,
some
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in some
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cases
 criminal should be given a chance to
work
 for volunteering
to
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apply
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the
society
 which may be a fruitful action towards reducing the crime in the
society
.
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