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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet.As a result we cannot trust the information we read there.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

#anyone #post #news #internet #trust #information
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In recent days,
majority
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 of
people
 using their smartphones
everyday
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.The reason behind
to
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this
 is
internet
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the internet
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.Humans are aware
with
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of
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the
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technology and they explore new things with the help of broadband.In
contemporary
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the contemporary
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 era, everyone could update
news
 online.
Consequently
,
people
 cannot faith
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that like
this
information
 is relevant or not.I completely agree with
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 ideology and
reasons
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 for my opinion will be elucidated in forthcoming paragraphs with relevant illustrations. To commence with, why in these days everyone can broadcast
news
 from their own mobile.The
first
 and foremost reason is individuals are having their own gadgets which
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 easily available in
recents
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recent
 days.
Also
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,Also
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 they get free internet data with the device which
people
 can easily use and use many applications
such
 as Facebook,Instagram and many more.There are numerous human beings who
post
 daily
news
 on
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social media without knowing
that
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information
 is wrong or right.Even former
these
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false
news
 spread their peers as well,which is not right for the nation.As some
people
 have influenced from
such
 incorrect
information
,they find many
difficulities
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difficulties
 which could create
plethora
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a plethora
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 of disaster problems in their life.To illustrate, in
recent
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a recent
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 survey of world health organization that 80
percent
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individuals
indivudals
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of indivudals
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 are dying
with
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 fast food which was
fake
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a fake
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 report putting by
facebook
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Facebook
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.World
healty
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health
healthy
 organization did not say anything about
this
 topic. To add more,in recent decades every person has good knowledge about
the
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information
 technology.Most
of
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people
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the people
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 creating own
you tube
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youtube
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 channel which is totally free and broadcast their
news
 related to the community,politicians and many more.They
post
fraudlent
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fraudulent
news
 over there which effect
on
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the country.
For example
,In 2019 someone had posted
wrong
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the wrong
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 details about
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chief minister
chiefminister
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the chiefminister
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 of
the
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India and which was purely incorrect and many
people
 protested that
you tube
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youtube
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 channel after
this
 incident.Apart from
this
,
government
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the government
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also
 took very stringent action on the owner of the channel.
Therefore
,
people
 should aware of
information
 that it has
truth
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 or false before
broascast
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broadcast
 on
the
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social media. To conclude,owing to the reasons that society should know about
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the
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news
 that
information
 is right or wrong before
post
 anywhere.
Moreover
,
government
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the government
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 should take stringent rules so
no body
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nobody
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 could try to put false
information
 online.I am in favour of that anyone could
post
 on the internet some time it could be wrong and humans cannot trust on some
news
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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