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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result we cannot trust the information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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In
this
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 contemporary era, the advancement of technology played
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 role in human society. One of major technique which is highly used by
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 majority of humans in the current scenario is
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internet
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the internet
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 which
become
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 effective resources and has globally released many useful
informations
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pieces of information
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 on the social
media
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 for
people
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 development. Somehow it
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 shows false news which
become
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 less trustworthy
amongest
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amongst
 the
people
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. I am in complete accord with the given notion and the reasons for my opinion will be elucidated in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are numerous reasons to
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this
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 ideology.
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 and
formost
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foremost
for most
,
information
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 on the
media
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 is not always reliable because they have several resources on
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social
media
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 which adds
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 of reviews on the same subject. To explicate, social bloggers who use their personal accounts
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 as on
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 and
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 to
post
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 relative
information
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 on
famous
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the famous
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 topic, which varies data on
same
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the same
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 subject. For exemplify, according to
survey
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 conducted by American University in 2019, 85% of American faced the problem of
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asthma
 due to following the diet schedule from
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internet
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the internet
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. Thereby, it can be seen from
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 point that wrong
information
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 on social
media
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 may mislead
person's
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a person's
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 activity.
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 to
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, another major factor which proves that individual cannot
merly
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merely
 rely on world wide web is
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 amount of users on youtube, attracts
people
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 towards their page. To explain, more number of
youtubers
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YouTubers
post
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 details just to lead the interest of
vast
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 majority of
people
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, misleads their thought by giving unreliable
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.
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, as per recent research done by
Indian
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the Indian
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 newspaper "The Hindu", youtube page. millions of mature beings failed in their competitive examination by following the data of
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internet
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the internet
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. To conclude, owing to reasons
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a number
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 of social
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 pages with different thoughts and unsaturated data
post
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 by
youtubers
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YouTubers
 lessen the trust of
people
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 which may
plays
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detrimental
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 role in
individual's
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an individual's
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 life, I
am completely agree
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 with
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a given
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 ideology which states that anybody can
post
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 news on the
internet
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 which may be deceitful.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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