A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sydney, I received your letter and I am happy to know that you are doing well and planning to go on a camping holiday
this
summer for the
first
time. I think you should definitely go
this
camping because of your busy schedule life. I believe
this
holiday will reduce the stress and boosts up you with positive energy
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if considering your workplace tensions. I suggest you go fishing, hiking or tent camping. These activities will give you an opportunity to take a long walk or observe and enjoy nature’s beauty.
This
would
also
give you a chance to make new friends and improve your mood actually. I must consider the drawbacks of
this
camping, so you take extra care of yourself during camping. As you are going on a holiday in summer, nature’s weather conditions are unpredictable and hot. There are chances that maybe you deal with bad bugs, or have to share bathrooms with others as there would be other people at that campsite.
Finally
, if it's all right with you, I would
also
like to join you on
this
camping. It will be a great time for us as we never went together for so long. I will wait for your response. Best Wishes, Latifa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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