Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and gives your opinion.
It is argued that the tourism measures for local areas separate into two ways, welcoming
tourists
is believed that tourist attraction could increase their native income. Whereas, disallowing Use synonyms
tourists
reckon on conserving their Use synonyms
culture
activities should continuously be held without infestation from vast Replace the word
cultural
travelers
. Change the spelling
travellers
In addition
, I will discuss both ideas and Linking Words
then
give you my opinion.
On the Linking Words
first
hand, The downside of disallowing Linking Words
tourists
is that local commercials will not develop as Use synonyms
it
should. Correct pronoun usage
they
For example
, flea markets in KhonKaen have more customers which are Thai and Linking Words
foriegn
Correct your spelling
foreign
tourists
compared to Nong Bua Lamphu which doesn’t have many visitors.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, the local infrastructure Linking Words
such
as the airport, roads, and official places will not expand in the local areas. Linking Words
However
, the advantage of not allowing visitors is that the possibility of sustaining native traditions e.g. some floating markets may continue in the village. Linking Words
Moreover
, environmental protection should be maintained Linking Words
such
as the number of solid waste will be reduced Linking Words
in
the coast.
Change preposition
on
On the other hand
, welcoming Linking Words
tourists
Use synonyms
increases
money and the significance of culture. Change the verb form
increase
For instance
, Linking Words
tourists
buying permits, visas and local goods when they visit attraction helps in the growth of revenue. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, most of the revenues are used for Linking Words
the
local developments and maintenance. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, tourism generates more jobs Linking Words
to
local people which means Change preposition
for
tourists
who visit any place Use synonyms
requires
stay, travel and food.
In conclusion, Add the particle
torequires
although
some people propose to prevent local culture from visitors. But, it is unnecessary to close Linking Words
tourist
places. Due to, there is a risk of developmental delay in the local areas. Change preposition
to tourist
Finally
, native authorities and individuals should work together to state appropriate measures for their places.Linking Words
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