Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and gives your opinion.
It is argued that the tourism measures for local areas separate into two ways, welcoming
tourists
is believed that tourist attraction could increase their native income. Whereas, disallowing tourists
reckon on conserving their culture
activities should continuously be held without infestation from vast Replace the word
cultural
travelers
. Change the spelling
travellers
In addition
, I will discuss both ideas and then
give you my opinion.
On the first
hand, The downside of disallowing tourists
is that local commercials will not develop as it
should. Correct pronoun usage
they
For example
, flea markets in KhonKaen have more customers which are Thai and foriegn
Correct your spelling
foreign
tourists
compared to Nong Bua Lamphu which doesn’t have many visitors.
Secondly
, the local infrastructure such
as the airport, roads, and official places will not expand in the local areas. However
, the advantage of not allowing visitors is that the possibility of sustaining native traditions e.g. some floating markets may continue in the village. Moreover
, environmental protection should be maintained such
as the number of solid waste will be reduced in
the coast.
Change preposition
on
On the other hand
, welcoming tourists
increases
money and the significance of culture. Change the verb form
increase
For instance
, tourists
buying permits, visas and local goods when they visit attraction helps in the growth of revenue. Furthermore
, most of the revenues are used for the
local developments and maintenance. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, tourism generates more jobs to
local people which means Change preposition
for
tourists
who visit any place requires
stay, travel and food.
In conclusion, Add the particle
torequires
although
some people propose to prevent local culture from visitors. But, it is unnecessary to close tourist
places. Due to, there is a risk of developmental delay in the local areas. Change preposition
to tourist
Finally
, native authorities and individuals should work together to state appropriate measures for their places.Submitted by nitipong48 on
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