Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

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is a serious issue to outline that whether leisure is making

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their doors of creativity. I strongly agree

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point and I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, machinery has become part of life. From the invention of a small pin to big vehicles, life has drastically changed and

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is not making

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lazy

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it is making them more creative.

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have known how creative or

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they are on

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platform. Some

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applications and are leading on reel platforms. Another example of automation is simply seen in schools, if

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was not implanted in schools, none of the students would have been exposed to the advantages of using a computer. With the help of modernisation, society is seeing change,

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are becoming creative, and are getting to know what skills they have and in what area they need to focus on.

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, to prove my point I have one example to pen down. All the movies today are making use of technologies and

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has increased the demand

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rate is going high as companies are employing skilled

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. Creativity has drawn out of

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since they have been making

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of

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. In the urban areas, networking was the main issue and

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problem has been solved with the

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g network, now communication has been easier and unskilled workers are making use of automation to learn more and bring their business online.

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, with the rise of

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disease,

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is the only plus point that the

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are using to make money. To conclude,

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is not making

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lazy but has made human life easier and

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creative

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